Sailing

PHOTO PROMPT ยฉ Rochelle Wisoff-Fields 

As the sailboat drifted aimlessly out to sea, I knew I would never see Robert again. He thought he knew enough about sailingย for a short jauntย by himself. ย He had never taken anyoneโ€™s advice to heart and did exactly what he wanted. ย Knowing this, Iย stillย tried hard to stop him from sailing solo. ย As I watched him sail farther away, Iย couldnโ€™tย tear my eyes away from hisย sailboat. ย I tried to keep him in sight as long as I could, but soon the tearsย overwhelmed. ย Whether out of fear or the possibility of freedom, Iย wasnโ€™tย sure.ย 

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7 responses to “Sailing”

  1. James Pyles Avatar

    Maybe they both need to be free from one another.

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  2. Prior... Avatar

    Good story and many things came to mind – especially the fact that sailing is no joke – the sea is a serious thing to navigate and that cocky or just immature assuming he knew enough had me worried too – also, now i want the part 2! what’s next….. hmmmm

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  3. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Kate, your last line is a real zinger. May Zephyr grant her wishes.

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  4. Nancy's Notes ๐Ÿ–Š๏ธโ™ฌ Avatar

    I’m leaning toward freedom. Good story, Kate.

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  5. James McEwan Avatar

    Unwanted is the worst fear.

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  6. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    Now I understand why she didn’t alert the coastguard

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  7. Dale Avatar

    You just have to let them go… hope nothing awful happens to him and that she starts living her own life.

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